Concede that life is diffiCult Aspire to change the unchAngeable Persist in providing help to Process Intrinsic trends that hold Impossible Tenacity to hold on to faiTh Under duress of depravity Unresponsive to Leading in discipline, comfort, Leaning to Amplifying easy acceptance of Another Troublesome Tenet that Empowers dissolving families unitEd against trends.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Your poem, “The Syren’s Serenade,” perfectly captures the essence of the theme “Moonlit Tides.” The moonlit setting and the use of tidal metaphors effectively evoke the idea of powerful emotions and movements.
Here’s a breakdown of your poem:
– The syren’s serenade represents the call of hope and humanity, urging people to take a stand against adversity. – The moonlit sky and waves create a sense of wonder and beauty, contrasting with the struggles and hardships faced by those in the poem. – The themes of survival, faith, love, and empathy are woven throughout the poem, highlighting the resilience of the human spirit.
Your poem effectively explores the theme, and the line count is accurate.
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Thank you for the honor and your hard work. Mostly, thank you for the critique that demands i raise my writing to a higher level.
The Syren’s Serenade
The syren serenades the waves To a symphony of tunes that raves About the moonlit sky filled with stars Telling stories of outrageous quests
Some for saving loved ones as they traips Into dangerous mountains, never fails To entertain, garner emotional travails Of terror, survival, guilt, regret for losses quails
The strength of faith, Belief in the quests, Yet, they listen to the serenade of nights Filled with wild sounds, crackling fires, that fights The darkness of despair’s hold that blights
Happiness’ divinity that always gladdens The soul in gratitude for the simple gardens That grow In eternal darkness within heaven’s Parade of scintillating beauties that never listens
To the cry of those sailors whose homes Are all they wish for, for there peace comes Within the arms of loved ones whose Love, empathy bind them to the cause,
A cause whose tides rise in the night But caress the shore In the fight For taking a stand with humanity Never resting till peace isn’t wishful thinking.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Our bleeding, broken hearts of clay And blood bleed profusely in a cup Overflowing with torments of war that sup On hope’s depression that hangs in a bay
Turned blood red in a husk of hay, Dried up hope that can’t stay alive In a world that seems to have forgotten to strive For peace, for their compassion is blown astray.
HIS palms safeguard the pieces of hearts Pulverized by visions of deadly murder On screens that bring screams of mother, Father, children in horrific suspension as parts
Are blown to smithereens and only identifying Thing is the ink on limbs carrying names Of children in black, that gets erased as flames From explosions erode any ink stains remaining
On skin that deliquesces from being scorched By burning flames that flutter over Corpses, gas that dematerialize any cover With its combustible matter, a deflagrated
Hideous serpent that swallows everything In its path and ignites into a colorful, reddish blaze That only receeds upon engulfing the craze Of all that is in its path, turning it to a Phoenix rising from ash.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you for the honor and your hard work. A review of the poem by Erica
The poem “Starlight” by Malak Kalmoni Chehab fits perfectly with the theme “Cosmic Musings”! The poem beautifully explores the symbolism of starlight, using it as a metaphor for hope, optimism, and confidence.
There are 12 lines in the poem. Well done, Malak Kalmoni Chehab!
Some potential strengths of the poem include:
1. *Imagery*: The use of vivid descriptions like “bright living stars,” “shimmering wonder,” and “shooting star” effectively evokes the celestial theme. 2. *Emotional resonance*: The poem explores the emotional impact of starlight, conveying a sense of hope and optimism.
The poem’s message about finding confidence and strength in the symbolism of starlight is inspiring.
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Starlight
The darkened night sky is populated By bright living stars that brightened All our nightmares, giving us the radiance That bundles us in a cocoon of confidence.
Such shimmering wonder shines into your soul, Adding hope, optimism, an irrefutable scowl That repudiates all pessimism, darkness, And the need to succumb to its insidious whispers.
The murmur of such powers is devastating If not fenced and bound. Placing It in a securely locked chest, that is impossible, To open when your will inters it with all that’s enjoyable.
Revere the wondrous effect of shooting star That lightens your burdens and shines a spotlight Upon all that’s good, wondrous, loving, bright, And endlessly supporting your strengths from within.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
The poisoned apple can snuff a life Without a qualm, either slowly or fast, It still kills without remorse, as strife, Stress, and negativity are all a test
To be overcome or death is not rest, It creates gossip’s unrest in negativity, Whose a pest greater than any disease that’ll crest And fall as nature accommodates its biology
To fight Its contagion. Yet, it’s still Easily deposed if positivity takes hold, Rises to the fore, a brilliant grace of will That’s unincumbered by all that’s depressed
Into a well of darkness that’s hell When faith, Belief, and optimism Are the test that help you ring the bell That destoys negativity’s Nepotism.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the accolade and your hard work.
Feather’s Journey
Spring sprang in spite of the spell Of frozen winter thawed with a bell Of flowing flowers whose colors Display their beauty while nature’s gay borders
Spin into a jeté budding into flowers, Multitude of shapes, sizes, colors, Overflowing between leaves leave The shade above, around flowers to weave
A tapestry of beauty that’ll cleave Your heart if Marred to be taken apart. Heave A sigh of relief when gazing on nature’s Industrious workers, as bird feathers
Highting each spring color to guide Your attention to protection against the waved Encroachment of population on rich soil That’ll never be a foil
For contemplation of the feather Garnering it power of flight tower Over the leaves adorning them in beauty And freedom to see the world fully
Aware that the feather has traveled On the wind, free, soft, colored Varied species, nubile in its aerodynamic Ability to reach the unreachable, as it’s bucolic.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the accolade and your hard work required.
MUNDANE
Muddle through the mundane morass Under the umbrella of life, ungrateful for the Narcissist cycle of life that’s drainingly Dramatic in daily routines, yet, once your Ample gratitude kicks in, you Note all you have that others don’t Empowers you to push through the little things.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the accolade and your hard work.
Resurrect Miracles
In a world where faith dissipates, Like fog in the fall skies, creates Mammals, mountains, shapes that face The world, haughty in the knowledge that grace
Is innate and humanity is stamped In your DNA, but while sins have manned A heavy toll on your dwindling compassion It requires the miracle of resurrection
In a bid to elevate humanity from Its downward spiral into depravity that come With a heavy price, souls flaming in hell. It’s time for a resuscitation of what fell,
Sinful souls suffering, I give You a second chance to live A just, compassionate life full Of prayer, communion with GOD, never full of bull.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
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