Poets in love, Love, feelings flame Flame your passion, Passion burns like lava, Lava that torches hearts, Hearts whose drumming beat, Beat the ordinary into a pulp, Pulp of fear decimates as raw, Raw emotions that never cave, Cave under constant pressure, Pressure of despair, difficulties, Difficulties that strain your love, Love that overcomes ill-fortutunes, Fortunes that give moral support, Support of family, imagination, Imagination soars with life, Life, stupendous in activity, Activity of fleeting moments, Moments eternally, in poetry alive , Alive with cheer in a memory, Memory bank that gives flight.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Your poem, “The Syren’s Serenade,” perfectly captures the essence of the theme “Moonlit Tides.” The moonlit setting and the use of tidal metaphors effectively evoke the idea of powerful emotions and movements.
Here’s a breakdown of your poem:
– The syren’s serenade represents the call of hope and humanity, urging people to take a stand against adversity. – The moonlit sky and waves create a sense of wonder and beauty, contrasting with the struggles and hardships faced by those in the poem. – The themes of survival, faith, love, and empathy are woven throughout the poem, highlighting the resilience of the human spirit.
Your poem effectively explores the theme, and the line count is accurate.
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Thank you for the honor and your hard work. Mostly, thank you for the critique that demands i raise my writing to a higher level.
The Syren’s Serenade
The syren serenades the waves To a symphony of tunes that raves About the moonlit sky filled with stars Telling stories of outrageous quests
Some for saving loved ones as they traips Into dangerous mountains, never fails To entertain, garner emotional travails Of terror, survival, guilt, regret for losses quails
The strength of faith, Belief in the quests, Yet, they listen to the serenade of nights Filled with wild sounds, crackling fires, that fights The darkness of despair’s hold that blights
Happiness’ divinity that always gladdens The soul in gratitude for the simple gardens That grow In eternal darkness within heaven’s Parade of scintillating beauties that never listens
To the cry of those sailors whose homes Are all they wish for, for there peace comes Within the arms of loved ones whose Love, empathy bind them to the cause,
A cause whose tides rise in the night But caress the shore In the fight For taking a stand with humanity Never resting till peace isn’t wishful thinking.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, Natasha, for the honor and your hard work.
Button Moulder
Button molds are varied in colors, Shapes, sizes, materials that alters The appearance of our clothing Making us better looking.
As the button moulder statue made From shoulders, one arm folded, never faded, Enormous binoculars for gazing At life’s beauty through peering
From the button’s eye, never veiled By social screens of a fast-paced Life filled with the ultra superficial That tends towards the unforgiveable
That’s filled with violence of blood, Addiction that lives in your blood, Actions that turn a child into an orphan, Stomping on other’s rights to be open,
Open to immorality that needs To destruction of family unity that breeds Bonds of compassion, empathy, forgiveness That our superficiality doesn’t harness
The power of discipline, strength of will, Faith and belief in yourself that’ll never fall For if society embued us with that, then Rebellion would ensue as a ban for politics with pen.
A new chapter begins in a flurry Of white flowy snow, soft as wool, pearly Shine giving us fleeting hope that’ll soar In flight forever fighting the depressor For dominion over the fealty for life That’ll keep our flighty hearts young with fire.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
If “Love opens the most impossible gates;” and “Love is the gate to all the secrets of the universe.” Then, love is all powerful, eternal, rebellious, never bland, But compassionate promise In a universe
Filled with dissent, competition, a love of money, And sin. I give thanks that my love, husband, Is my rock, my motivator, and one key To my writing that’s unwavering and always holds my hand.
My love is there for the difficult decisions, Guidance and friend to our children, Has sleepless nights when they’re in positions Of upheaval that require strategic precision.
For me, he is my star in a dark night, The shoulder I cry into when life’s unbearable Losses enrobe my heart in darkness, as he helps me fight The devouring abyss making it acceptable.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the honor and your hard work.
Peace’s Breath
Round, round goes the world In a merry-go-round filled With laughter, life, violence, Death in a grim cycle needing peace.
Peace for the young whose Disrupted childhoods froze With wars’ colonizing program To alter countries’ cultures for a flame
Feasting on disintegration of families, Cultures, languages, civilizations whose priorities Are fostering longevity by strengthening Community’s peaceful bonds, wishing,
Wishing for the propagation of unity Against an army of aggression, violently Expanding its reach into disharmony Among land, people, conquerors, passionately
Striving to compensate murder Rather than an orchestration that’ll ponder The need to revitalize a willful strength Embued with peace’s powerful breath.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the honor and your hard work.
Peace’s Breath
Round, round goes the world In a merry-go-round filled With laughter, life, violence, Death in a grim cycle needing peace.
Peace for the young whose Disrupted childhoods froze With wars’ colonizing program To alter countries’ cultures for a flame
Feasting on disintegration of families, Cultures, languages, civilizations whose priorities Are fostering longevity by strengthening Community’s peaceful bonds, wishing,
Wishing for the propagation of unity Against an army of aggression, violently Expanding its reach into disharmony Among land, people, conquerors, passionately
Striving to compensate murder Rather than an orchestration that’ll ponder The need to revitalize a willful strength Embued with peace’s powerful breath.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the honor and your hard work.
Pose?
To pose or not to pose? That’s the question on this day of non-repose. She stands, elegant, regal, Smiling into his chocolaty eyes, fall, Falling into his soothing pool of love.
The depth of emotions that hiss And run deeper than any abyss, This moment in time will never come Back again, for its novelty’ll dim But never die in the pyre of time,
It’ll grow and flow into their Joint lives of adoration as their Tears of joy and sadness blend Into sysmic waves that thrashed Many a couple, but Not them!
Time will try to siphon their Joint time into darkness, but their care Will stomp on time’s vain Attempt to suck out the rain Turning it into a melodic refrain.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Poetry for Change 