She looks out of her window Where the darkness covers the world Beyond her room filled with pink roses, in low Vases, littered on her windowsill, not a coward,
She watches the storm brew from within, Safe in her harbor, a haven of scents adorn Her with mystique, incomparable to the crow who built in Its home outside her window in a flow of corn
Ears reaching up to the sky, pleading, Pleading for rain to steep the soil with Life giving water, rejuvenating, healing, Giving abundance where famine takes away breath
Of life on a scorching summer day. She watches, lightning flutter in brilliant light As thunder booms its might, scaring those in play With extenuating fright whose plight
Will drown out their fears, replacing Them with a pinhole of hope shining Through the darkest raven blackness flying Into the sky with optimism sparking
A deluge of creativity unbound by earthy Trifles that bog the soul into a rut of endless routine.
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Malak Kalmoni. Chehab Vikas Arora My warmest greetings!
Yes! The collaborative poem connects with the theme of light and shadow. Analysis of the Poem The poem directly addresses the theme of light and shadow both literally and figuratively. It uses the contrast to explore concepts like creation, balance, emotion, and human nature. Here is a breakdown of how the poem connects to the theme: Creation and Balance: The first stanza uses the “shadows” as the origin of creation, with beauty being born “into light.” This sets up the idea that light and dark aren’t just opposites, but are intertwined and necessary for a balanced whole. Metaphor for Emotions: The poem extends the metaphor to human experience, comparing “pathos” (suffering, emotion) and “richness of soul” to opposing sides of a coin. This parallels the relationship between light and shadow, suggesting that both are essential parts of our inner world. Literal and Figurative Light Sources: The poem mentions the sun and moon as literal sources of light and shadow, but also gives them metaphorical roles. The sun’s “ablutions” and the moon’s “passions” are presented as forces that “coincide in stabilizing” the world. This reinforces the idea of balance between contrasting elements. The Unavoidable Shadow: The second poem brings in the personal, unavoidable nature of a shadow. The line, “Wherever you may go your shadow stays with you,” emphasizes that our “shadow” or darker side is an intrinsic part of us, a constant companion. This suggests that we cannot escape the duality of light and dark within ourselves. The poem consistently uses the duality of light and shadow to represent other opposing concepts like chaos and order, emotion and soul, and the divine and the mundane. The recurring idea is that these forces are not meant to be separated but exist in a state of interdependence, contributing to a harmonious or “mellow” whole.
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Collaborative poem Malak Kalmoni Chehab & Drvikas Arora Canada India Theme: Light and shadow
Within the shadows, creation came from chaos A reign out of which beauty was born Into light, where balance isn’t a horn That divides but embraces the two sides, pathos
And richness of soul, are opposing Sides of the same coin of emotions, Equipoised similarly to sun’s ablutions And the moon’s passions coincide in stabilizing
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The night’s fading darkness Is illuminated by filaments that glimmers With piercing reddish hues Into a horizon of fading darkened blues.
With each touch of brilliant, glinting light The scenery is transformed, bright As a white pigeon in heightened flight, Soaring, like Icarus, too near the sun’s slight
Heat that tenderly caresses its feathery Wings across all living things, bravely Broaching the new day optimistically, Knowing that man’s destruction will invariably
Alter the breathtaking beauty of sunrise, Twisting its vibrancy into shades Of tenebrous grey, colorless, and lifeless, As everything becomes hopeless.
Let each new day be your oath To be stronger than the sun’s breadth, As you emulate its depth Of strength, that reigns above all in stealth.
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On a baby blue sky day, the castle Enrobed in golden rays shining Off arched windows, bright ball Reflecting the lives, deaths that call
Out to the living, teaching wisdom From history etched on walls, There’s always a place and time For all around to learn and come
To conclusions that help the living Improve their plight by learning From history’s lessons without any whispering Of war or fight that has corpses lying
Out of sight. The whale statue adorning The outer walls, inviting, spontaneous warning: All to enter its domain, peering Into a long gone era of traversing
Centuries of wisdom runs into The Renaissance era of science That delves into all that’s tangible, a foe To faith that’s documented in books that grow
In importance, for the morals Within are a blessing for the intelligent, Who want to reduce their workload, calls Out that learning from experience isn’t a falls.
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As light is hope and all that’s bright, Learning to love in the sun illuminates Your perception on values, character, that fight To blot out negativity that’s darkened puss
That festers as an abyssimal blight To optimism whose courage roars in Flight to piece together poems whose bite Is only a loving caress, as their images pin
Your beauty from words to face, wrinkled From endured hardships but glows With the passionate compassion of being loved. As you shower me with languid eye’s light, the fight throws
Away the scourge of love’s broken heart By filling papers with poems that brook No argument to its plight in trying to strut The words in verses and lines that cook
Your presence into the essence of love Unbroken by a pessimistic world that implodes When amour is at its best fighting in brave Behest of a soul needing rest in paper adobes.
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You Are the Moon
As the moon, alone in the dark sky, Its light lightens the darkness, like You, whose presence illuminates by Existing alone, emblazon cheer’s bike
That rides an uneven trajectory Leading a life that radiates your flight While you light your path, cautiously You navigate using the kindling within to bite
The darkness with fear that’ll hunger To dissipate your glow of optimism, But your spirit and light will glitter And smolder the fire against pessimism
That oppresses in the night, But, you combat its limitations By letting your positivity soar, a kite Flimsy yet strong enough to conquer trepidation.
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Clipity- Clop
Itty bitty feet run around In a clamor of clip-clops That resonate in echoes that abound In a round of clapping shrieking pops
That reverberate with laughter That lightens the heart of burdens And a heaviness that cower When faced with the merry melody of laughter.
Let your Itty bitty feet lead, Lead you into mischief and solve Your way out of problems that feed Your will to be cheery when faced by laws above
Of society that set limitations, in isolation, For some, while others run amuck. Let your glee flee the deadened quiet of conventions By proving your worth with mirth that gets you unstuck.
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Spontaneous Flight
How do you spread your Wings to let love’s happiness in and pour? How does peace get a slice When stress has a price? How do you keep your purity Alive when faced with depravity?
They all come easily when faith, Spirituality have a strong breath That lightens a load in stealth, Streaming a warm breeze Into a leaden heart, a squeeze Of the slithers of sneaky suppression Of dark whispers causing depression.
Let the light of love, purity, Peace and joy spread their security In a balm of comfort and spontaneity.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Thank you, administrators, for the accolade and your hard work.
Spontaneous Flight
How do you spread your Wings to let love’s happiness in and pour? How does peace get a slice When stress has a price? How do you keep your purity Alive when faced with depravity?
They all come easily when faith, Spirituality have a strong breath That lightens a load in stealth, Streaming a warm breeze Into a leaden heart, a squeeze Of the slithers of sneaky suppression Of dark whispers causing depression.
Let the light of love, purity, Peace and joy spread their security In a balm of comfort and spontaneity.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
“In your light I learn how to love. In your beauty, how to make poems.” (Rumi)
Love’s Poetry
As light is hope and all that’s bright, Learning to love in the sun illuminates Your perception on values, character, that fight To blot out negativity, that’s darkened puss
That festers as an abyssimal blight To optimism whose courage roars in Flight to piece together poems whose bite Is only a loving caress, as their images pin
Your beauty from words to face, wrinkled From endured hardships but glows With the passionate compassion of being loved. As you shower me with light, the fight throws
Away the scourge of love’s broken heart By filling papers with poems that brook No argument to its plight in trying to strut The words in verses and lines that cook
Your presence into the essence of love Unbroken by a pessimistic world that implodes When amour is at its best fighting in brave Behest of a soul needing rest in paper adobes.
My poetry book, Perfectly Flawed poetry for change, is available on all eplatforms including Amazon. It was on the finalist list for the Canadian Book Club Awards 2023.
Poetry for Change 